Monday, March 17, 2008

What we learn from 4 years of college...

I was editing Sarah's research paper and found this sentence to be particulary excellent:


"The when there is a low marriage rate in general it shows that marriage is not as encouraged in that group so, consequently the people who do decided to marry would do so older because there is less pressure from the community surrounding them."


Yeah. Made sense to me.

10 comments:

  1. Hey, that sentence was in the making for perfect completion towards yes.

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  2. Whoa. That sentence blew my mind. It was profound, and it made my desire for tacos increase tenfold.

    Taco++

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  3. sarah's sentence made more sense then berserks...

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  4. Scooter! How dare you imply that something beyond what we already inferred to be positive would not have!

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  5. maybe I don't understand anything anyone is saying because I haven't gone though school all the way yet... I'll read this all again in a few years and see if it makes sense yet...

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  6. hah, that's probably it.

    but wait... neither have I... and neither has berserk....

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  7. you've had more school than me... and berserk did the academy... so you both beat me...

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  8. in my defense a 15 page research paper will do that to you :)

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